Myopia (A Tentative Title for a Tentative Poem)

Sixteen years of darkness:

Of blurred shapes, smudged and grey.

Gentle and gradual, a rising tide;

Slowly sinking into shadow.

I was engulfed by it,

Tender as a kiss.

Suddenly, with the discovery

Of lensis ocularis,

My world snaps back.

Like a rubber band or a heartstring,

Stretched to the breaking point

And then let go.

The world in focus;

Every leaf edged sharp and green.

But now, after so many years

Accustomed – re-accustomed – to clarity,

The charcoal has returned.

The blur of a hand passed over ink.

I’m near-sighted yet again.

Myopic.

I cannot see a thing.

Where are my glasses?

You must have brought them with you when you left.

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2 Responses to “Myopia (A Tentative Title for a Tentative Poem)”

  1. Sarah Says:

    Out of all of the poems, I like this the best because you leave room for interpretation instead of “telling” it all. Your images are explicit and striking (charcoal and ink are as real as it gets for me.) The line “Of lensis ocularis” adds a nice unexpected jolt in the rhythm, and the last two lines leave the audience wanting an explanation (at least I did). Beautiful.

  2. rachel91 Says:

    Here’s a secret: this is by far my favorite, too. It’s the only one I think has any sort of quality attached. The others are just nonsense I tossed out like spun sugar in those cotton candy machines. Mere exercises in poetry… This, however, makes me happy to think of it coming from my mind.

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